I'm sure much has already been said on this matter somewhere on the blogosphere, but I got to thinking about it today:
My characters are generally bad people. The whole stinkin' lot of them simply reek of original sin. They're perfectly awful which is only perfectly natural given the general state of humanity. Even us Christians are only sinners saved by grace.
But how do we write it?
Take swearing. [Those with gentler constitutions probably should stop reading and go do something else now.]
My characters never really swear. Oh, they use the words "friggin," "sodding" and "crap." I suppose some would consider that cussing of a sort. As someone who wasn't always a Christian, someone who sang in a horrid little metal garage band and spouted and sang the F-word at every available opportunity, I can honestly say that my pastor found these tamer substitutions immensely preferable! Did you know that if you sing something, it becomes second nature? That's why congregational singing is so important and should not be neglected for the sake of current musical trends in worship; congregational singing helps to form our shared liurgy! In any case, I swore in song and was in such a habit of swearing that I did it as unconsciously as breathing. I'd raised it to an art form. Of course, my favorite profanity was the F-bomb. The F-word in particular has always been versatile for the more brazen soul: a noun, adjective, verb.. you could even add new syllables to common words for added effect: for example, out-friggin-rageous! I digress.
So if you were to ask me if those words were cussing, I'd laugh. I do laugh! I laughed when people used them back when I peeled the wallpaper off the walls with every profane utterance! It wasn't really swearing at all. It was hinting at it.
When someone who grew up in church all their life or has become now so acclimated to Christian social norms that they've forgotten what they were like hears those words, some of them are convinced that I may as well be cussing.
Thus, we have a great divide in Christian fiction, an is/ought contradiction that must somehow be dealt with. As I understand it, there are two camps on the subject [I'm oversimplifying, I'm sure]: the Honesty camp and the Holiness camp. The Honesty party thinks we ought not sugar-coat sin. We ought to paint it as it is so real people can then see themselves reflected in the pages of our books and then be pointed to a real Savior. Something to that effect anyway. The Holiness camp thinks we ought not do anything of the sort. We ought to write our characters as role models. A sort of what would Jesus write crowd.
Which is an excellent question all it's own, btw! What would Jesus, the Master Storyteller write? His parables reflected the lives of real people. The Prodigal Son's protagonist is a disrespectful hedonist who finds grace. It would be intersting to study His parables anew with that question in mind.
Anyway, two camps overgeneralized. And I don't really fit into either. I think the Holiness camp authors write saccharine pieces that are a little too gilt-edged. They don't show people as they are, but how they prefer them to be. Are we really to suppose these fictional worlds contain no cigarettes, alcohol or dice. The characters seem too plastic. If any of them have flaws or sins they are either destined for conversion or they're the villains. No one struggles with a thorn in the side. Yet I know Christians who struggle with addictions. I know Christians who don't always do the right and proper Christian thing. I know Christians who often act self-righteously instead of graciously. One of them looks me in the mirror every day!
On the other hand, the Honesty guys are equally unappealing. Take gore and violence. I'm writing a sci-fi adventure piece. There are super-powered fist fights, guns, rockets, alien death rays and all of the high-flying action you'd expect out of a classic good versus evil brawl through downtown. Now, I could write a scene with lots of graphic gore and blood with people spitting out teeth and what-have-you [I don't] and that would be honest, but it would also be unnecessary. To be honest [and brutally so, as is my custom], I do have a scene where I note that someone's shin bone is jutting out of their leg. That's my goriest scene and it's simply necessary so that you know the extent of the character's injuries at that point and that, well, its a serious leg injury, not a sprain or a mere fracture. That sort of medical gore is necessary in a case like that, but I think that there's a line that can be crossed where it becomes gratuitous. Where we might as well follow that act with lions and Christians...
There's also the issue of the protagonist's faith. In almost every Christian novel I read, the protagonist is either a Christian at the start or he is by the end of the book. In my current book, only two Christians are evident. One's a preacher [supporting cast] and the other is the protagonist's dead father. The protagonist's Christian upbringing is evident, but it's also evident that he's not actually converted himself. As a preacher, I'm not a fan of forced conversions, in real life or in fiction. In my novel, which takes place over the course of one action-packed day, there simply wasn't time for reflection much less the sort of mini-sermon some Christian authors force into their novels. I'm not disrespecting those guys, if it's forced, it's superfluous - and it would never, ever happen that way in real life! So write something else.
But this raises a question: Should the protagonist be a role model? Or are we free to write our characters in different stages of their lives? What I mean by this is are we justified as Christian authors in writing a novel with a protagonist who isn't saved and doesn't get saved in the book and might not even get saved if I write a sequel? Or to give a more personal example, can we write about a protagonist from my foul-mouthed band days, influenced somewhat [or even greatly] by his Christian upbringing, but nowhere near the point of conversion in this segment of the plot of my life?
In exploring this [and I apologize for the length of this rambling discourse!] subject, I find it interesting to note that Christian authors can freely write murders and lies - it's the matters of Christian conduct [swearing, drinking, smoking, dancing, listening to metal, wearing Goth clothing, reading Harry Potter] that seem to set us off.
Any thoughts?
Rev Tony Breeden
Currently writing Johnny Came Home
Tags: Christian fiction, Johnny Came Home, Tony Breeden, ethics, profanity, protagonist, science fiction, writing
I agree with everything that has been said! Great points, everyone.
As an author, I tend to use the Frank Peretti approach mentioned by Charles. I think it works very well. I am a huge fan of giving the reader the idea of what is happening without going into tons of description. I frankly wish they would do that more often in movies. So, I might write something like:
"Give me a break!", he yelled. Swearing vehemently, he slammed his fist onto the table.
Tony, great comment on the power of lyrics. I also have a Master's degree in Music Education and people underestimate the power of music to shape the mind. And, as authors, we have to remember that we are influencing people by our words. This is another reason why I believe that although we shouldn't sugar coat sin, we also shouldn't spell it out (literally and figuratively!) for the reader.
A few Christian friends and I have been batting this "cussing" subject back and forth. Including my father-in-law, who was born, bred, and raised Christian and raised his family similar. He feels that using the word according to its dictionary definition (many of them are in the dictionary) is not actually cussing. Using a word simply as a "substitute" word is. Using a word to attack someone else "you b-" is cussing. I've been looking through the Scriptures for guidance on this. What I found was Jesus saying: "You brood of vipers!" in Matthew 3:7/12:34.
It would seem that profane language as defined by Scripture is a bit different than that defined by modern Christian culture.
And yet it's not really just "christian" culture. It's also a reputation. People automatically assume I'm "religious" because I don't cuss (not for a long time). Similar with drinking (debatable that not drinking in excess is not a sin) and smoking, that sort of thing. A Christian isn't allowed to fight back, cuss, drink, smoke, or many other things. And some things in that reputation I'd straight up disagree with, like "judging". These days if we said it was a sin to be homosexual, or frankly anything outside of husband and wife, we're "judging" and it's starting to get called a hate crime.
The reason I don't cuss is largely because of that reputation (I make enough mistakes, don't need to add cussing to it) and because once I start, I get carried away and it's hard to stop. But that's just me, life is safer and healthier when I don't cuss.
I find little reason in Scripture to avoid using "cuss" words entirely. Especially when used with the appropriate definition.
On to fictional characters in writing...it's FICTION. You're telling a story to make a point. In Deadly Disclosures, which I'll certainly agree is an awesome book, you've got a hardcore drunk. If cussing isn't allowed, why is drinking and vomitting? It's allowed because it shows the specific state of the character. The more you can convince the readers how low the character has gone, the better the turn around when they come to Christ or whatever turning point is in the story.
Reading about the drinking in the book is not going cause your mind to repeat words you don't want to be saying in your head. "Cussing" will.
There are two different kinds of cussing. One is using God's name in vain, using His name lightly without meaning. I've heard many Christian preachers put "my" in front of His name and it is nothing more than an excamation. This is taking the name of the Lord thy God in vain.
The other is vulgarities. The Bible does tell us to be a peculiar people. It says to be Holy in all manner of conversation. As you read your Bible through from cover to cover you will find that command sprinkled throughout the entire Book.
Robert Barnett said:A few Christian friends and I have been batting this "cussing" subject back and forth. Including my father-in-law, who was born, bred, and raised Christian and raised his family similar. He feels that using the word according to its dictionary definition (many of them are in the dictionary) is not actually cussing. Using a word simply as a "substitute" word is. Using a word to attack someone else "you b-" is cussing. I've been looking through the Scriptures for guidance on this. What I found was Jesus saying: "You brood of vipers!" in Matthew 3:7/12:34.
It would seem that profane language as defined by Scripture is a bit different than that defined by modern Christian culture.
And yet it's not really just "christian" culture. It's also a reputation. People automatically assume I'm "religious" because I don't cuss (not for a long time). Similar with drinking (debatable that not drinking in excess is not a sin) and smoking, that sort of thing. A Christian isn't allowed to fight back, cuss, drink, smoke, or many other things. And some things in that reputation I'd straight up disagree with, like "judging". These days if we said it was a sin to be homosexual, or frankly anything outside of husband and wife, we're "judging" and it's starting to get called a hate crime.
The reason I don't cuss is largely because of that reputation (I make enough mistakes, don't need to add cussing to it) and because once I start, I get carried away and it's hard to stop. But that's just me, life is safer and healthier when I don't cuss.
I find little reason in Scripture to avoid using "cuss" words entirely. Especially when used with the appropriate definition.
On to fictional characters in writing...it's FICTION. You're telling a story to make a point. In Deadly Disclosures, which I'll certainly agree is an awesome book, you've got a hardcore drunk. If cussing isn't allowed, why is drinking and vomitting? It's allowed because it shows the specific state of the character. The more you can convince the readers how low the character has gone, the better the turn around when they come to Christ or whatever turning point is in the story.
Does this mean that it's okay to write something in fiction that hopefully won't cause you to repeat the words in your head? What do you consider to be the limit? Is cussing the only "off limits for fiction" sin?
Ted Dekker's "Thr3e" novel uses a LOT of "substitute" cuss words. I loved the novel as a whole but thought that was a bit excessive at times. If there's going to be whole sentences filled with those words, I see no reason to continue subsituting.
"The Bible does tell us to be a peculiar people. It says to be Holy in all manner of conversation."
My Bible says to follow Christ's example. What do you then consider "You brood of vipers" if not cussing? It was meant as derogatory. Language "evolves" (changes over time, remains language) and since a cuss word is a word with that meaning represented, that appears to mean that context can make the difference between a word being appropriate or "cussing".
For example: there are words used for feces. I have grandparents that don't like to even say the p-word for #2. Yet it's official in the english dictionary that the s-word can mean feces.
Is "crap" in a sentence holy conversation? Holy is bringing glory to God, does that word do so? Then again, does a word like "aint"? Or any slang terminology? If you use advanced language skills and "big words" or simply proper english, with someone who only speaks street slang (just an example) is this holy in conversation?
My point is that I think (don't know for a fact) that culture defined certain words as "cuss" or not. I would be wrong to say the p-word around my grandmother because it offends her. I would not be wrong to say it in my own home, where it offends no one. Do not cause your brother to stumble.
Carol Flett said:Reading about the drinking in the book is not going cause your mind to repeat words you don't want to be saying in your head. "Cussing" will.
There are two different kinds of cussing. One is using God's name in vain, using His name lightly without meaning. I've heard many Christian preachers put "my" in front of His name and it is nothing more than an excamation. This is taking the name of the Lord thy God in vain.
The other is vulgarities. The Bible does tell us to be a peculiar people. It says to be Holy in all manner of conversation. As you read your Bible through from cover to cover you will find that command sprinkled throughout the entire Book.
Robert Barnett said:A few Christian friends and I have been batting this "cussing" subject back and forth. Including my father-in-law, who was born, bred, and raised Christian and raised his family similar. He feels that using the word according to its dictionary definition (many of them are in the dictionary) is not actually cussing. Using a word simply as a "substitute" word is. Using a word to attack someone else "you b-" is cussing. I've been looking through the Scriptures for guidance on this. What I found was Jesus saying: "You brood of vipers!" in Matthew 3:7/12:34.
It would seem that profane language as defined by Scripture is a bit different than that defined by modern Christian culture.
And yet it's not really just "christian" culture. It's also a reputation. People automatically assume I'm "religious" because I don't cuss (not for a long time). Similar with drinking (debatable that not drinking in excess is not a sin) and smoking, that sort of thing. A Christian isn't allowed to fight back, cuss, drink, smoke, or many other things. And some things in that reputation I'd straight up disagree with, like "judging". These days if we said it was a sin to be homosexual, or frankly anything outside of husband and wife, we're "judging" and it's starting to get called a hate crime.
The reason I don't cuss is largely because of that reputation (I make enough mistakes, don't need to add cussing to it) and because once I start, I get carried away and it's hard to stop. But that's just me, life is safer and healthier when I don't cuss.
I find little reason in Scripture to avoid using "cuss" words entirely. Especially when used with the appropriate definition.
On to fictional characters in writing...it's FICTION. You're telling a story to make a point. In Deadly Disclosures, which I'll certainly agree is an awesome book, you've got a hardcore drunk. If cussing isn't allowed, why is drinking and vomitting? It's allowed because it shows the specific state of the character. The more you can convince the readers how low the character has gone, the better the turn around when they come to Christ or whatever turning point is in the story.
No, I do not consider "You brood of vipers" a vulgarity. Jesus did say they were of their father the Devil, which I gather could also be called a viper. He was saying exactly what He meant.
I don't watch TV because I don't want to feed my mind a lot of garbage, so I guess I have become more sensitive to what I think garbage is. I consider vulgarity to be any word that has a sex or bathroom connotation that is just used simply as an expression, and my own conscience dictates what my mind should allow. I don't even like substitute words because I know what they are replacing, .
What a person writes is up to them, but it sure disappoints me when I have to throw out a book that would otherwise be good reading if it wasn't sprinkled with garbagy language.
Robert Barnett said:Does this mean that it's okay to write something in fiction that hopefully won't cause you to repeat the words in your head? What do you consider to be the limit? Is cussing the only "off limits for fiction" sin?
Ted Dekker's "Thr3e" novel uses a LOT of "substitute" cuss words. I loved the novel as a whole but thought that was a bit excessive at times. If there's going to be whole sentences filled with those words, I see no reason to continue subsituting.
"The Bible does tell us to be a peculiar people. It says to be Holy in all manner of conversation."
My Bible says to follow Christ's example. What do you then consider "You brood of vipers" if not cussing? It was meant as derogatory. Language "evolves" (changes over time, remains language) and since a cuss word is a word with that meaning represented, that appears to mean that context can make the difference between a word being appropriate or "cussing".
For example: there are words used for feces. I have grandparents that don't like to even say the p-word for #2. Yet it's official in the english dictionary that the s-word can mean feces.
Is "crap" in a sentence holy conversation? Holy is bringing glory to God, does that word do so? Then again, does a word like "aint"? Or any slang terminology? If you use advanced language skills and "big words" or simply proper english, with someone who only speaks street slang (just an example) is this holy in conversation?
My point is that I think (don't know for a fact) that culture defined certain words as "cuss" or not. I would be wrong to say the p-word around my grandmother because it offends her. I would not be wrong to say it in my own home, where it offends no one. Do not cause your brother to stumble.
Carol Flett said:Reading about the drinking in the book is not going cause your mind to repeat words you don't want to be saying in your head. "Cussing" will.
There are two different kinds of cussing. One is using God's name in vain, using His name lightly without meaning. I've heard many Christian preachers put "my" in front of His name and it is nothing more than an excamation. This is taking the name of the Lord thy God in vain.
The other is vulgarities. The Bible does tell us to be a peculiar people. It says to be Holy in all manner of conversation. As you read your Bible through from cover to cover you will find that command sprinkled throughout the entire Book.
Robert Barnett said:A few Christian friends and I have been batting this "cussing" subject back and forth. Including my father-in-law, who was born, bred, and raised Christian and raised his family similar. He feels that using the word according to its dictionary definition (many of them are in the dictionary) is not actually cussing. Using a word simply as a "substitute" word is. Using a word to attack someone else "you b-" is cussing. I've been looking through the Scriptures for guidance on this. What I found was Jesus saying: "You brood of vipers!" in Matthew 3:7/12:34.
It would seem that profane language as defined by Scripture is a bit different than that defined by modern Christian culture.
And yet it's not really just "christian" culture. It's also a reputation. People automatically assume I'm "religious" because I don't cuss (not for a long time). Similar with drinking (debatable that not drinking in excess is not a sin) and smoking, that sort of thing. A Christian isn't allowed to fight back, cuss, drink, smoke, or many other things. And some things in that reputation I'd straight up disagree with, like "judging". These days if we said it was a sin to be homosexual, or frankly anything outside of husband and wife, we're "judging" and it's starting to get called a hate crime.
The reason I don't cuss is largely because of that reputation (I make enough mistakes, don't need to add cussing to it) and because once I start, I get carried away and it's hard to stop. But that's just me, life is safer and healthier when I don't cuss.
I find little reason in Scripture to avoid using "cuss" words entirely. Especially when used with the appropriate definition.
On to fictional characters in writing...it's FICTION. You're telling a story to make a point. In Deadly Disclosures, which I'll certainly agree is an awesome book, you've got a hardcore drunk. If cussing isn't allowed, why is drinking and vomitting? It's allowed because it shows the specific state of the character. The more you can convince the readers how low the character has gone, the better the turn around when they come to Christ or whatever turning point is in the story.
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